قدصيدتين بالنغلنزي من تألفي ^_^

محربا حلوين

انا احب الأشعار الانجلنزيه وصرت اسمعها
وااجد لدرجت انا الحين صرت اكتب بحيث ابوق كلمه من اغنيه واكمل الباقي من عندي:wink::bigsmile:
اتمني تعجبكم
....
1بعنوان((don,t give up))

when you try your bast
put you don,t sccesed

when you be so tird
put you can,t sleep

when you be with your love
put you can,t spake

when you wake up
then faind it it,s dreem

when your love smile
and you feel so sweet

then you laugh
and know how it,s wierd

((so what ever it,s just don,t :bigsmile:give up))

2بعنوان((i am lost))

every where i go i still alone
couse i lost where i belong

then my heart return to iron
and i don,t know what i,ve done

and no thing still my own
expit one thing i don,t whant at all

and all i want it,s to be with you now
just i need to hold on

I miss be with you:sad2:
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الاملائيه

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nic work countnu this work
thanks
kabat al ashkeen

thanks i thought this won,t like any one^_^